FORMAT OF FORMAL LETTER


A letter is a form of written communicationLetter writing is considered as one of the most important questions as students can easily score full marks in this question with a little preparation. Everyone must know how to write a Letter.

Letters are of two types: formal and informal

Formal letters include business letters, letter of complaints, letter to government officials, etc. 

Informal letters include letters to friends, relatives, acquaintances, etc. 


Formal Letter Types: 

1.
Letter to the Editor.
2.
 
Letter to the Government.
3.
 
Letter to the Police.
4. 
Letter to the Principal.
5.
 Business letter. 
6.
Application for job. 
7. 
Letter to the Bank Manager.
8.
 Invitation letter.
9.
Resignation letter.
10.
Leave Application. 
11. 
Leave Application for marriage.
 

Marks for letter:

1) Sender's address and date - half marks

2) Recipient's address - half marks

3) Subject and Salutation - half marks

4) Body of letter - two marks

5) Closing of letter - half marks

6) Correct use of Grammar in the letter - one mark


While writing a formal letter, one has to follow a simple Letter Writing Format.

1) WRITER'S ADDRESS:
 
(i) Top left hand corner of the page.
 

(ii) Do not put your name. 
 

(iii) You may or may not put punctuation marks in the address.



2) Date: 
a) Is written below the address.
 

b) You may leave a line between the address and the date.
  

c)
 Write it in the form - 8th August, 20xx.


3) Receiver’s address: The address of the recipient of the mail (the officer/principal / Editor) is written here.


4) The subject of the letter: The main purpose of the letter forms the subject. It must be written in one line. It must convey the matter for which the letter is written.


5) Content: There should be minimum 3 paragraphs. 

1st paragraph
IntroductionExpand the subject.
For example: 

a) With reference to the above mentioned subject, I, the undersigned, 
would like to draw your attention towards.......... 

b)
This letter is to bring to the notice of the authorities concerned ......... 
 

c)
I shall be highly obliged if you grant me..
  

d)
I am sad and disappointed to find that .......... 
 

e)
Over the last few days, there has been a sharp increase in ..............



2nd paragraph - Details. Elaborate on the three aspects causes / effects / remedies. Write two sentences on each of the aspects.


3rd paragraph Conclusion. I hope the authority concerned will take the necessary action and relieve us of the problem. 
 

6) The Salutation :  ( i ) For Formal letters - Sir, / Madam, / Dear Sir. 

****Language should be Formal and assertiveOnly formal language can be used i.e. abbreviations and slang language should be avoided.

* Format for Formal letter.

  • Self Address (Sender’s address).
  • Date.
  • Receiver’s Address.
  • Subject: .....................
  • Salutation (Sir/Madam)
  • Content
    •  Refer to previous communication or source of news or information.
    • Status (position/issue).
    • Analysis and reasons.
    • Suggestion/Action required.

Closing: 

  • Thanks
  • Yours sincerely/truly
  • Signature
  • Full rank/name, if any             ________________________________________________________________________________

** Inquiry Letter Writing Tips
Some useful language expressions

  • We are interested in … and would like you to…
  • Would you please tell me…/ send me the information…
  • I shall be obliged if you could give me the following information…
  • Be polite and formal. Introduce yourself and mention your requirements.
  • Ask for detailed information about the product (price, discount, terms and conditions). _______________________________________________________________________________

*** Complaint Letter Writing Format
Some useful language expressions

  • We regret to remind you that…
  • I am writing to complain about…
  • We are sorry to inform you that
  • Be polite and formal. Introduce yourself and describe clearly what your complaint is.
  • Remember that the newspaper is only a medium to address the issue
  • Do not ask the editor to resolve the issue ________________________________________________________________________________

**** Letter To Editor Topics
Some useful language expressions

  • Through the esteemed columns of your newspaper, I wish to bring to the notice of the concerned authorities…
  • In my opinion…
  • This is a very shocking/ disturbing use of…
  • Describe your opinion clearly.
  • Say what you would like the receiver to do to redress the complaint. (replacement/ refund of money/ free service)
  • Mention your next course of action, if the complaint remains unattended. ________________________________________________________________________________________


Example 1. Write a letter to thCustomer Service of  ABC Company for poor service.

Answer:

Ganesh Society,
A-21,
M.N. Road,
Mumbai – 72.
Date – 1
st June 2021.

Customer Service Manager,
ABC Company,
Mumbai – 103.

Subject : Complaint letter for poor service.

Respected Sir,

My name is _______. I am writing this letter to complain to you about the poor service provided by your company. The network you have provided is not working properly. There is a fluctuation in network.

Since I am a working person, and most of my work is done from home due to lockdown. I am not able to finish my work due to network issue. I have complained many times to your customer representative but there is no solution for this problem.

I hereby request you to please solve my issue as soon as possible. Or I have to stop using your service with unsatisfactory.

Yours faithfully (Name) 




Example 2. Write a letter to theditor of newspaper requesting him to spread the awareness about harmful effect of spending too much time on internet.

Answer:
Sunris
e Society,
B-2,
H.N. Road,
Mumbai – 400 002.

Date – 1
st June 2021.

Th
e editor,
Tim
es of India,
Mumbai – 400 015

Subject : Request to spread the awareness about harmful effect of internet.

Respected Sir, 

With reference to the above mentioned subject, I 
would like to draw your attention towards the addiction of the present day situation of youngsters who are addicted towards social sites.

Youngsters are always online day and night. Some are greatly a
ctive full night. They are wasting their precious time and energy. We are getting information from these sites, that is good but there should be a particular time slot for it. People should have control on themselves. Some people do dangerous stunt to look like an actor and upload it. One mistake and they may loose their life.

I request you to use your news
paper to highlight this issue.

Yours faithfully,
Anil.




Example 3. Write a letter to theditor of newspaper requesting him to spread the awareness about evil effect of superstition in our area.

Answer:
Minal Society,
B-22,
P.J. Road,
Mumbai – 400 045.

Date – 1
st June 2021.

Th
e editor,
Tim
es of India,
Mumbai – 400 015

Subject : Request to spread the awareness about evil effect of superstition.

Respected Sir, 

I am Mr. Anil residing in above mentioned address, would like to tell about the death of 6 year old boy due to the superstitious belief of his family. The child's family was having financial problem, so under the influence of tantrik, child's parents have taken this step. I was deeply pained when I heard this news.

It is sad to see that now also people believe in superstition. There is nothing good that can be said about Superstitious. Superstition is bad for our society. Today we have made a good progress in science and these superstition do not make any sense in the present society instead it creates worst situation sometimes. People should not waste their valuable time in it.  It's an appeal to all the like minded people that they should create awareness about the evils of superstition to the entire society. It is a serious challenge in front of us to eradicate superstitions from its root.

I request you to use your newspaper to highlight this issue. 

Thanking you. 
Yours sincerely,
Bipin.




Example 4. Write a letter to the Commissioner of Traffic Police complaining about traffic congestion.

Answer: 

Sunrise Society,
C-2201,
T.N. Road,
Mumbai – 400 059.

Date – 1
st June 2021.

Commissioner of Traffic Police,
Bandra
,
Mumbai – 400 022

Subject : Complaint about traffic congestion.


Respected Sir, 

I am Mr. Anil residing in above mentioned address, would like to tell about the increase in traffic near Borivali station. I was stuck for nearly 1 hour and 30 minutes in the traffic yesterday.

The reason for this is there is increase in number of cars, bikes, auto rickshaw, etc. It has led to increase in air pollution, sound pollution also. Many vehicles owners horn continuously. On top of this there is parking of vehicles on both sides of road. Sometimes argument also happens between vehicle owners because of accidents. Because of this lot of problem is created and it has disrupted the peace in that area. 

Please take necessary action and relieve us of the problem. 

Thanking you. 
Yours sincerely,
Anil.





Example 5. Write a letter to "The Secretary" of M.K. Club requesting him to enroll your name for the Blood Donation Camp. 

Answer: 

Binal Society,
A - 25,
H.N. Road,
Mumbai – 400 115.

Date – 1
st June 2021.

The Secretary,
M.K. Club,
Mumbai – 400 005

Subject : Blood Donation Camp.


Respected Sir, 

I am Mr. Khanna residing in above mentioned address would like to enroll my name in this camp. I have read your advertisement in " The morning" dated 30th May 2021 about Blood Donation Camp  which will be organized on 10th June. 

 I wish to donate blood as I regularly donate blood every year. It saves a life of a person who is in need. With me, my brother and friends also want to come to donate blood. Many people die in accident due to loss of blood from body. These donated blood will truly help that person and can save their lives. Their families will be very happy when their near one is alive.

I sincerely appreciate this effort on the part of M.K. Club. I will try to bring more friends in this camp. It is a very good deed. I will surely help you for this noble cause.

Thanking you. 
Yours sincerely,
Khanna.





Example 6. Write a letter to "The Mayor" of your city requesting him to provide better facilities for Water shortage. 

Answer: 

Star Society,
F - 1005,
M.J. Road,
Mumbai – 400 166.

Date – 1
st June 2021.

The Mayor,
Bandra(w),

Mumbai – 400 122

Subject : Water shortage in our locality.


Respected Sir, 

I am Mr. Rao residing in above mentioned address would like to complain about the water shortage in our locality. There is no water for last few days. In other areas also same problem is there.  

We don't have enough water for our daily needs. We have given written complaints to municipal authorities but no one came. I have an idea to avoid water crisis in our city. There are various steps by which water can be saved. Those who are wasting water should be punished and fines should be collected. We should recycle water and start rain water harvesting. Framers should use drip irrigation method in their field to avoid wastage of water. Various program should be conducted for public to educate about how to save water. 

Kindly I am requesting you to look into this matter and relieve us of the problem. Please take some steps. This is my simple request.

Thanking you. 
Yours sincerely,
Rao.





Example 7. Write a letter to "The Manager" of the bus depot, complaining about the scarcity of buses. 

Answer: 

Sunrise Society,
A - 106,
D.M
. Road, 
Mumbai – 400 166.

Date – 1
st June 2021.


The Manager,
Dadar(w),

Mumbai – 400 002

Subject : Poor bus service.


Respected Sir, 

I am Mr. Das residing in above mentioned address would like to complain about the poor bus service in our area. It is taking too much time to go to office in morning and to come home in evening. It causes lot of problems in our area. 

I live in Prabhadevi and the only bus route is number 51. Many of the buses that were scheduled in the morning are cancelled. Buses come at 30 minutes interval from morning to evening. The students and office-goers face great difficulty because of their less frequency. Many youngsters rush to board the bus and bus becomes full in no time and others are just standing in queue. 

Please take the necessary action and and make the service regular and more frequent and relieve us of the problem. 

Thanking you. 
Yours sincerely,
Das.





Example 8. Write a letter to "The Manager" of the Ajay hotel, asking about rooms rates and other facilities and payment procedures. 

Answer: 

Sheetal Society,
A - 2103,
Ramdas. Road, 
Mumbai – 400 222.

Date – 1
st June 2021.


The Manager,
Ajay hotel,

Matheran,


Subject : Booking a Room in Hotel.


Respected Sir, 

I am Mr. Mehta residing in above mentioned address. I and my three friends would like to visit Matheran from 21st June to 25th June ( 4 nights). We would like to know the rates and facilities. Are there any discounts available?

What will be the room charges for two double-bedded rooms? Are the rates inclusive of food? Are rooms well- equipped with all the modern facilities?  We wish to go to Dodhani Waterfalls, Rock Climbing, Ambarnath Shiv Temple and Irshalgad Fort . Can you arrange a taxi for us? What is the amount of advance money to be paid?  

Please send me the details as soon as possible. I shall be obliged if you could give me the following information. 

Thanking you. 
Yours sincerely,
Mehta.





Example 9. Write a letter to your school Headmaster requesting him to start Yoga classes in your school.

Answer: 

Students of Std X,
Vijay school,
Ramdas. Road, 
Mumbai – 400 156.

Date – 1
st June 2021.


ThHeadmaster,
Vijay school,

Mumbai – 400 333,


Subject : Request for arranging regular yoga classes in school

Respected Sir, 

We, the students of Std X, would like to start Yoga classes in our school. All the students want Yoga classes to be conducted. This has been a popular demand by many of us for some time now. 

There are many benefits of Yoga. It will help students a lot who are tensed during examination. Yoga is a perfect stress reliever. It reduces stress to a great level. We will be physically and mentally healthy. Globally Yoga is being accepted by all people in their life for healthy living. |Our honorable Prime Minister, Narendra Modi. has  suggested 21st June as International Yoga Day and it was accepted by the UNGA in 2015.

So, I request you to introduce yoga class to us. Please consider our suggestions. 

Thanking you. 
Yours sincerely,
Students of Std X.




Example 10. Write a letter to "The Editor" of the newspaper, telling about the road accident  and requesting him to write an article on the importance of road safety in his newspaper.

Answer: 

Sunrise Society,
A - 2205,
R. B. Road, 
Mumbai – 400 067.

Date – 21
st May 2021.


The Editor,
The Times of India,

Mumbai - 400102,


Subject : Importance of Road safety


Respected Sir, 

I am Mr. Nair residing in above mentioned address. I yesterday witnessed a very disturbing accident at S.V. Road, Goregaon (w). 

A little boy aged 8 years old was cycling near Raj Mall at S.V. Road. Suddenly a bus dashed him. He was thrown onto the road. He hurt his hand and his leg got fractured. He was in fact bleeding also from his hand. Luckily he was alive. The bus sped off without even stopping. I and my friend along with other college students took him to the hospital. We informed his parents also.

I request you to address the importance of Road safety as well as how to take care of ourselves in your newspaper. Lots of people read your newspaper hence valuable life will be saved and accidents will be reduced. I shall be obliged if you publish it in your newspaper. 


Thanking you.

Yours sincerely,

Nair.




Example 11. Write a letter to "The Mayor" of Mumbai, about the urgent steps needed to prevent incidents of heat related deaths.

Answer: 

Divine Society,
A - 605,
A. S. Road, 
Mumbai – 400 014.

Date – 31
st June 2021.


The Mayor,
M.N. Road,

Mumbai - 400102,


Subject : Urgent steps needed to prevent incidents of heat related deaths.

Respected Sir, 

I am Mr. Ajay residing in above mentioned address. From last 14 days many people have died due to sunstroke and the number is increasing day by day. Hospitals are full with patients and doctors are not able to see every patients.

Civics health bodies should take urgent steps needed to prevent incidents of heat related deaths. There are some suggestions needed to be implemented at the earliest. The civics authorities should advertise these following points:

  • People should not go outside between 11.00 a.m. to 4.00 p.m.
  • Drinking water should be provided at all the places.
  • Number of doctors should be increased in hospitals.
  • People should visit doctors if they face any health problems related to heat strokes.
  • Emergency number and ambulance service should be provided to reduce the number of casualties.

Please take the necessary steps and implement it as soon as possible and relieve us of the problem. 

Thanking you. 
Yours sincerely,
Ajay.



Example 12. Write a letter to "The Inspector" of Police about the urgent steps needed to prevent the crimes.

Answer: 

Sunrise Society,
M - 1105,
D. L. Road, 
Mumbai – 400 111

Date – 2
nd June 2021.


The Inspector of Police,
Dadar(w),

Mumbai - 400025,


Subject : Urgent steps needed to prevent serial thefts.

Respected Sir, 

I am Mr. Tarun residing in above mentioned address. From last one month there have been increase of thefts in our area. Yesterday my neighbor's house was robbed. They went to attain marriage party for one week. Gold ornaments worth Three lakhs rupees as well as One lakh rupees were stolen.  

My neighbor have filed an FIR and investigating are still in progress. This is sixteenth robbery that has taken place in our area for past 25 days. Police force should adopt certain measures to prevent theft. There are some suggestion from my side which will prove useful. First there should be police station in our area. Second there should be regular police patrolling in our area during night times. Third security cameras should be installed at every corner. 

Please take the necessary steps and implement it as soon as possible and relieve us of the problem. I do hope that these criminals are soon brought to book. 

Thanking you. 
Yours sincerely, 

Tarun.
 

  



Example 13. You are a sport teacher of your school. Write a letter to "The Manager" of Sport Goods dealer asking for information regarding sports items that your school wishes to purchase. 

Answer: 

P.S. English School,
K.P. Road,
Bandra (w), 
Mumbai – 400 025

Date – 22
nd July 2021.


The Manager,
D. T. Sports Store,
Dadar (w),

Mumbai - 400 012,


Subject : Enquiry regarding sports items to be purchased by our school

Respected Sir, 

I am Mr. Kapil a sport teacher from P.S. English School. Our school wants some sports item as we are having old stocks. We are interested in purchasing some sports items and would like you to give us some details. 

We wish to make the following purchase:
1)  Eleven cricket kits
2) Five flying disc
3) Five basketballs 
4) Four football helmets
5) Ten Tennis cricket bat. 

Kindly send us information about the price as well as discount given. Tell us about the mode of payment to be made and time taken for the delivery. We need these items urgently and are looking forward to an early reply. 

Thanking you. 
Yours sincerely,
Kapil
P.S. English School, Mumbai ) 




Example 14. Students of your school desire to visit a factory. Write a letter to "The Manager" of  a factory requesting permission and tell the reasons for your visit.

Answer: 

M.K. English School,
R.M. Road,
Chembur (w), 
Mumbai – 400 071

Date – 3
rd May 2021.


The Manager,
Dimple Textile Mills Ltd,
Dadar (w),

Mumbai - 400 014,


Subject : Request for permission to visit the factory

Respected Sir, 

I am Mr. Aryan a school monitor from M.K. English School. Our school has given us projects and field work. Marks will be given to students who have completed the project and done field work. Field work enables students to examine the way scientific theories interact with real life. 

Our school has been arranging visits to various factories from time to time. There will be forty five students to visit your factory if you kindly grant us permission to do so. 

We will be visiting your factory which ever day that is convenient to you. I shall be obliged if you  give us the permission. Waiting for your favorable reply. 

Thanking you. 
Yours sincerely,
Aryan
( M
.K. English School, Mumbai ) 




Example 15. Write a letter to the Executive Engineer expressing the urgent need for water conservation.


Answer: 

Jeevan Society,
T.D. Road,
Chembur (w), 
Mumbai – 400 071

Date – 23
rd November 2021.


The Executive Engineer,
Water Department,
Parel (w),

Mumbai - 400 014,


Subject : Urgent need for water conservation

Respected Sir, 

I am Mr. Hiren residing in above mentioned address. There is an increase in water cut is our city for past one month. We are experiencing difficult times due to scarcity of water. 

Since we had poor rains this season, the lakes that provide us water are half filled. We can see tankers moving around everywhere in the city. People are standing in queues at public taps. We should try to conserve water and make things easier for everyone. Awareness drive should be created about water conservation. Various steps should be undertaken to help this type of situation. Some of them are as under:

1) Educate the public through telecasts and broadcasts about how to stop water wastage.
2) Officials should do random checks in homes and public places about any leakages in water taps or water pipes.
3) Making compulsory about water harvesting in every society.  

Please take the necessary steps and implement it as soon as possible. I shall be obliged if you will consider it.

Thanking you. 
Yours sincerely,
Hiren.
 





Example 16. Write a letter to the Editor of the newspaper complaining about the hardships faced by commuters of local trains.


Answer: 

Sunrise Society,
S.V.. Road,
Khar (w), 
Mumbai – 400 052

Date – 2
nd April 2021.


The Editor,
T.P. Times,
Dadar (w),

Mumbai - 400 014,


Subject : Hardship faced by local train commuters

Respected Sir, 

I am Mr. Yash residing in above mentioned address. Through the esteemed columns of your newspaper, I wish to bring to the notice of the concerned authorities that there is an increase in number of problems faced by commuters. The trains are not punctual and the indicators are not working properly in the station. Due to this lot of rush is there during peak hours.  . 

The trains that comes to station is totally packed. Old people as well as college students are not able to catch the trains. There are some groups of people in the trains that sing vulgar songs. Some of them who are standing on foot door of train won't let others to catch the train. Lot of arguments happen during that time. The overcrowding of trains is the least of our hardship. 

I request you to use your newspaper to highlight this issue.

Yours faithfully,
Yash



Example 17. Write a letter to "The Mayor" of Mumbai, requesting him to put forward the idea of a multi-purpose stadium. 

Answer: 

Priya Park,
A - 3005,
M. G. Road, 
Mumbai – 400 097

Date – 31
st June 2021.


The Mayor,
M.N. Road,

Mumbai - 400102,


Subject : Need for a multi-purpose stadium

Respected Sir, 

I am Miss Anju residing in above mentioned address. The reason for writing this letter is children are finding difficult to play in playground. Earlier there were many playgrounds where children could play but now there are new buildings coming up every year. Big malls and housing colonies have come up in our area. 

Children of our area cannot play. Outdoor games are necessary for their physical and mental growth. Hence there should be a multi-purpose stadium in our locality as it has become a necessity. The stadium should have facilities like badminton, table tennis, yoga, and gymnasium. It will give a further boost to all the children for sporting activities. 

Please take the necessary steps and implement it as soon as possible.

Thanking you. 
Yours sincerely,
Anju.





Example 18. Write a letter to "The Principal" of the college requesting him to send you a prospectus of the courses offered by the college.

Answer: 

The Heaven,
D - 3022,
L. M. Road, 
Mumbai – 400 065

Date – 1
st May 2021.


The Principal,
S.S. College,
Dadar (w),

Mumbai - 400 045


Subject : Request for Prospectus

Respected Sir, 

I am Mr. Rajesh residing in above mentioned address. I have just appeared for my S.S.C examination and waiting for result. I am top ranker in my school and want to join your prestigious college. 

There are various courses in your college. I wanted to see what are the courses available in your college along with fees. Would you please send me a copy of the prospectus of your college.

I am interested to join your college and hence I am sending Rupees two hundred for the cost of prospectus. 

Thanking you. 
Yours sincerely,
Rajesh.
 





Example 19. Write a letter in response to the advertisement for admission in a cricket coaching center. The advertisement was there in classified section of a newspaper. 

Answer: 

Suraj Heights,
B - 2225,
Das Road, 
Mumbai – 400 105

Date – 1
st March 2021.


The Recruitment officer,
T.D. Coaching Center,
Bandra (w),

Mumbai - 400 050


Subject : Application seeking admission for cricket training.

Ref: Ad in the classified section of 'D.D. Times' dated on 21st February 2021

Respected Sir, 

I am Mr. Kapil residing in above mentioned address. I am studying in standard tenth at D.B. School. I have been playing cricket since I was in fifth standard in the school. I have represented my school in many tournaments and our school has won many trophies. At inter school cricket tournaments I have scored 165 runs. I am a good batsman.

I have heard about your modern way of coaching. Your coaching staff have introduced an innovative style of catching practice, throwing ball at stumps and batting. I wish to improve my skills and use my full potential. I can be your promising cricketer for national level under your guidance. 

I am willing to join your coaching center. Please let me know if you are willing to take me. I shall be obliged if you will consider it.

Thanking you. 
Yours sincerely,
Kapil.
 





Example 20. Write a letter to "The Manager" of a local bank asking for detailed information about savings accounts to be opened by the students of your class. 

Answer: 

Sandstone Apts,
F - 506,
Dhule Road, 
Mumbai – 400 012

Date – 21
st July 2021.


The Manager,
Kapil Co-op Bank Ltd,

Mumbai - 400 065,


Subject : Request for information regarding savings accounts for students

Respected Sir, 

I am Miss Parul residing in above mentioned address. I am studying in standard tenth at M.B. School. I want to open saving accounts in your reputed bank. Along with me there are 30 students of my class who wish to open saving accounts in your bank. We have been saving our pocket money given by parents and we want to deposit it in bank. 

We are interested and would like you to send me the following information:
1) What is the minimum balance to be maintained?
2) What is the rate of interest given by bank?
3) What is the documents required?
4) Are there any offer or discounts for students?
5) Parents account in your bank is compulsory? 

Please send us the information as soon as possible. I shall be obliged if you could give me the following information

Thanking you. 
Yours sincerely,
Parul.
 





Example 21. Write a letter to "The Divisional Forest Officer" Karnala bird sanctuary booking a weekend visit. 

Answer: 

V.S. High School,
M.M Road,
Dahisar(E), 
Mumbai – 400 068

Date – 1
st August 2021.


The Divisional Forest Officer,
Karnala Bird Sanctuary,

Navi Mumbai - 410 206,


Subject : Permission to visit Karnala Bird Sanctuary

Respected Sir, 

I am Mr Paul studying in standard X in V.S. High School. Fifty students along with seven teachers would like to visit Karnala Bird Sanctuary in the month of November. We are interested in searching for birds apart from trekking. We are planning for a three day visit.

Would you please send me the information regarding our visit:
1) Are Government rest house available in  Karnala? 
2) When the booking of rest house should be done?
3) Do we need special permission to visit the Sanctuary?
4) Are there guilds available for us to give information?
5) What are the guidance to be given to students? 

Please send us the information as soon as possible. I shall be obliged if you could give me the following information

Thanking you. 
Yours sincerely,
Paul.
 






Example 22. Write a letter to "The Assistant Commissioner" of Traffic Police complaining  about reckless driving by youngsters in your city. 

Answer: 

Kajal Society,
G - 2105,
M.M. Road, 
Mumbai – 400 021

Date – 22
nd June 2021.


The Assistant Commissioner of Traffic Police,
Worli,

Mumbai - 400 018.


Subject :Complaint regarding reckless driving by youngsters.

Respected Sir, 

I am Mr. Dhaval residing in above mentioned address. From last three months there have been increase of reckless driving by youngsters. Women, girls and children are afraid to walk on the road. Many people have been injured.

Nowadays many youngsters have a personal vehicle. These youths enjoy speeding on the roads. At evening lot of bikers ride with full speed. As well as they blow horns continuously and shout a lot. They don't care anyone. We have already seen ten hit and run accidents this month.  This should be stopped. Strict action should be taken and offenders be caught and punished. 

There is a possibility of death of anyone on the streets. Rash driving is a deadly killer. It is against traffic rules. Please take the necessary steps and implement it as soon as possible and relieve us of the problem. 

Thanking you. 
Yours sincerely,
Dhaval



Example 23. Write a letter to "The Police Inspector" complaining about the rising incidence of chain snatching in your locality.

Answer: 

Tilak Heights,
B - 905,
Dena Road, 
Mumbai – 400 013

Date – 5
th August 2021.


The Police Inspector,
Borivali Police Station,

Mumbai - 400 067.


Subject :Complaint regarding increasing incidents of chain snatching.

Respected Sir, 

I am Miss Puja residing in above mentioned address. From last two months there have been increasing incidents of chain snatching. These chain snatchers target women wearing ornaments. Women are afraid to walk alone on the streets during morning and evening time. 

Yesterday around 5.30 in evening, a bike-borne man snatched the gold chain of a 35-year-old woman. While resisting the robbery, she fell and suffered minor injuries. A biker who was wearing helmet came on Pulsar bike behind her and snatched her gold chain. She was in deep shock after this incident.  

Please increase day-night patrolling of the police. Please take the necessary steps and implement it as soon as possible and relieve us of the problem. I do hope that these criminals are soon brought to book. 

Thanking you. 
Yours sincerely, 

Puja.
 




Example 24. Write a letter to the Editor of the newspaper complaining about the hardships faced by people in your district due to scarcity of rain and appealing for funds.


Answer: 

Moonrise Heights,
G.L.. Road,
Malad (w), 
Mumbai – 400 064

Date – 14
th October 2021.


The Editor,
T.P. Times,
Dadar (w),

Mumbai - 400 014,


Subject : Problem faced by people due to Drought.

Respected Sir, 

I am Mr. Kamlesh residing in above mentioned address. Through the esteemed columns of your newspaper, I wish to bring the attention of your readers the pitiful state of the people in Beed, Maharashtra. My parents are staying there and are facing lots of problems.

There is no drinking water available due to less rainfall. Wells have dried up. Food shortage is there for humans as well as cattle's. It has not just affected crops but also cattle farming and its associated economy. It has created unemployment in the village. Farmers are doing suicide because of crops failure. Schools have been shut down due to excessive heat. People are dying due to dehydration and starvation.

I appeal to your readers to donate. I shall be highly obliged if your readers donate generously. People who want to donate can directly send cheques or bank drafts to  " The Chairman, Beed draught fund" at above address. 

Thanking you. 
Yours sincerely, 

Kamlesh.
 




Example 25. Write a letter to "The Mayor" of Mumbai, requesting him to put forward the need for a public park in your area.



Answer: 

Orange Heights,
C - 705,
Dhule Road, 
Mumbai – 400 067

Date – 31
st June 2021.


The Mayor,
M.N. Road,

Mumbai - 400102,


Subject : Need for a public park in our area.

Respected Sir, 

I am Miss Kajal residing in above mentioned address. The reason for writing this letter is senior citizens are finding difficult to exercise and relax with their friends for a lack of public park. Earlier there were many green trees everywhere but now there are new buildings coming up every year. Big malls and housing colonies have come up in our area. 

Children of our area cannot play if park is not there. Outdoor games are necessary for their physical and mental growth. Hence there should be a public park in our locality as it has become a necessity. Parks, playgrounds, and open green spaces provide an opportunity for people to get a much-needed breath of fresh air. Urban parks are like a lungs of a city. They help to fight air pollution and help to control temperatures and humidity. 

So I request you to build a park in our area as it is a necessity. Please take the necessary steps and implement it as soon as possible.

Thanking you. 
Yours sincerely,
Kajal.




Example 26. After the science exhibition you wish to express your thanks to the person who judged the exhibits. Write a letter to him.

Answer: 

Narayan English School,
King Road,
Vile Parle (w), 
Mumbai – 400 056

Date – 2
nd July 2021.


Mr. Nair,
B.A.R.C.
Deonar,

Mumbai - 400 094,


Subject : Letter of thanks.

Respected Sir, 

I am Mr. Pankaj, School head boy, standard (X)  from Narayan English School. It was a pleasure to have you as a judge for science exhibition. We are thankful for you for giving your percious time for judging.

Near about 250 students from different school have came here to exhibit their science projects. Our school have emerged victorious at regional level. We didn't thought of getting first runner up "R" ward award. It all happened because of our hard work and your valuable judgement. You gave our school a very good prestige.

Please come to our school personally for motivating and giving inspiration to all the students. 

Thanking you. 
Yours sincerely,
Pankaj (School Head boy of Std X).



Example 27. Write a letter to "The Mayor" of your city complaining about the menace of vendors outside your school.

Answer: 

Sanjeevani High School,
Devdas lane,
Parle (W),
Mumbai – 400 056

Date – 21
st June 2021.

The Mayor,
Bandra(w),

Mumbai – 400 065

Subject : Menace of vendors outside school


Respected Sir, 

I am Mr. Ganesh Rao Studying in Standard X of Sanjeevani High School. I would like to complain about the menace of vendors outside our school. Lot of traffic is created because of these vendors. During break time of our school they bring lot of unhealthy foods outside the school compound.

These eatables are kept open and lot of school children are eating it. These eatables are very much oily and are sold under unhygienic condition. Many students have fallen ill because of this. This is dangerous health issue for our school children. We have complained twice to local municipal  authorities but still no action is been taken. 

Kindly I am requesting you to look into this matter and relieve us of the problem. Please take some steps so that all the vendors are prohibited from selling near our school.. This is my simple request.

Thanking you. 
Yours sincerely,
Ganesh Rao.




Example 28. Write a letter for a post of a librarian for a public library.

Answer: 

Anup Heights,
L.M. Road,
Kandivali ( W ), 
Mumbai – 400 067

Date – 
31st July 2021

ThManager,
D.M.M. Library,
Mumbai – 400 058

Subject : Application for the post of Librarian

Ref: Classified ad in The DNA , dated 29th July 2021.

Respected Sir, 

I am Mr. Tiwari residing in above mentioned address would like to apply for the post of Librarian. I have done my M.A with History as my subject. I also have master's degree in library science.

I also have two years’ experience to work as a Volunteer at Local Library. I have good command over computer and can give you best service from my side.

I am enclosing my C.V. along with the Xerox of my certificates. Please consider me and call me for an interview.  

Thanking you. 
Yours sincerely,
Mr. Tiwari




Example 29. You have lost your S.S.C. certificate. Write a letter to the Divisional Secretary, S.S.C. board to issue you a duplicate certificate.

Answer: 

Tarun Heights,
Tilak Road, 
Dadar ( W ), 
Mumbai – 400 056

Date – 
21st August 2021.

Divisional Secretary, 
Pune Divisional Board, 
Maharashtra State Board,
Pune – 411 004

 

Subject : Request for issue of a duplicate copy of S.S.C Certificate.

Respected Sir, 

I am Mr. Jackie residing in above mentioned address. I was a student of St. Mary high school, Mulund. I have passed S.S.C exam in March this year. I got S.S.C certificate from the school.

But I lost my S.S.C certificate during transit. I have searched many times but it couldn’t be found. My parents also searched but were unsuccessful.

My details are as under:
Name: Jackie Dutt
Seat No. B: 112560 
Centre: Mulund
 

Please send me a duplicate copy of S.S.C certificate as I want to give it to college. I shall be highly obliged if you send it.

Thanking you. 
Yours sincerely,
Mr. Jackie Dutt.




Example 30. Write a letter to your teacher apologizing for the poor performance in examination.

Answer: 

Sea Bird Heights,
Mangal Road, 
Parel ( W ), 
Mumbai – 400 056

Date – 3
1st January 2021.

Class teacher - Std. X.
C.F. English school,
Dombivali (W)
Mumbai – 400 004

 

Subject : Apology for poor performance.

Respected Sir, 

I am Mr. Karan studying in Std. X - C. I am very sorry for not studying properly in recent Preliminary exam. I thought that I will get good marks in exam but I failed. I was very much shocked to see my result.

I thought that I will study at last moment and didn't spend too much time on revision. I was over - confident, that I will get good marks in exam. This result have opened my eyes. I have started to study properly, made my time-table and started to solve papers also. Even my parents have started to take orals. 

I know that you considered me one of your clever student. I assure you that I shall not let you down. I will be topper in our school. 

Thanking you. 
Yours sincerely,
Mr. Karan.





Example 31. Write a letter for a post of Office Assistant.

Answer: 

Orange Heights,
S.V. Road,
Vile Parle ( W ), 
Mumbai – 400 058

Date – 
31st July 2021

ThManager,
G.V. Gobal,
Mumbai – 400 004

Subject : Application for the post of Office Assistant

Ref: Classified ad in The DNA , dated 25th July 2021.

Respected Sir, 

I am Mr. Khanna residing in above mentioned address would like to apply for the post of Office Assistant. I have done my B.Com with 72%. I have done Computer course. I also have good command over Excel, Tally and other basic course.

I also have two years’ experience. I am fluent in English. I have a pleasant personality and can handle difficult situation in easy manner. I will give my 100% in job. You can take my record from my previous employer.

I am enclosing my C.V. along with the Xerox of my certificates. I do hope that you will consider me and call me for an interview.  

Thanking you. 
Yours sincerely,
Mr. Vilas Khanna.






Example 32. Write a letter to the Trust, making request for grant of scholarship to enable you to join a college.

Answer: 

Milan Heights,
S.V. Road,
Santacruz ( W ), 
Mumbai – 400 058

Date – 21
st June 2021

The Secretary,
Swami K.L Trust,
Mumbai – 400 014

Subject : Request for scholarship

Respected Madam, 

I am Mr. Tejas Gokhale residing in above mentioned address. I have just passed SSC examination and got 91% overall. I want to join science stream and want to become a doctor.  

But due to poor financial condition I am not able to join science stream. My father earns 12000 Rupees per month and he have to support eight of us. I came to know that your Trust helps needy and scholar student to pursue higher education. I want to apply for the same. 

I am enclosing my SSC marksheet and a letter from my school principal. Please send the form for this purpose.

Thanking you. 
Yours sincerely,
Tejas Gokhale 




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